Encouraging Singaporeans to lead a healthy lifestyle:
~stressing importance of living healthily
~minimises risks of contracting illnesses
~ways to live and eat healthily
~build exercising facilities at all neighbourhood playgrounds
Sustaining a healthy lifestyle is critical for one's well being. Not only can we cut costs on our medical expenses, but also bond with our loved ones through exercising contemporaneously. Exercising moderately benefits our body, mind and soul. It is the key to the prevention of contracting illnesses and ameliorating our ailing health. Start living healthy now!
Being educated about the need of acquiring an A grade lifestyle, our nation has implemented more frequent physical education lessons, otherwise more commonly known as PE. Our younger generation will be better equipped with knowledge on living healthily. Not neglecting the seniors of our nation, we have constructed exercising facilities at numerous neighbourhood playgrounds. Being granted the privelege of all these facilities, we should make use of our blessings and start living healthy now!
Eating. Many people perceive of it as an easy task, but in actual fact only a pocketful know how to do it the right way. There are campaigns promoting good eating habits like asking for more greens and less oil. Ask and you will receive. Henceforth, start living healthy now!
Cherlyn & Michelle
Wednesday, August 5, 2009
encouraging a healthy lifestyle 18/8
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I like your ending sentence but I think you guys should have some repetition words to make it sound more like a speech. Good try though :D
ReplyDeletelike the sentence "Ask and you will receive.
ReplyDelete", it is quite impactful.
Para 1: 'exercising as one'?
ReplyDeletePara 2: 'pioneers' seem to give me the idea of dead pple. urgh. Perhaps 'seniors'?
Para 3: Starts nicely. Short and sweet. But paragraph seems rushed. Last sentence doesn't quite tie in with the topic of your speech.
I think the first paragraph is very good as it gets the point across. I feel that from the sceond paragraph onwards, there should be more powerful words.
ReplyDeleteLove the way your speech flows(:great words used to make the readers think deeply into this issue. You also gave some advise so readers know what they should do to ensure a healthy lifestyle:). However, try to have a 'motto' and keep repeating it in your paragraphs
ReplyDeletethe way you guys arranged the sentences made this speech more convincing. I like the first paragraph you wrote, it has listed the benefits of exercise and encouraged people to do so.
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