-fewer exams
-wear home clothes
-start school at a later time
-More subject choices
Schools are where we,students spend large portions of our time at.
Therefore,students should definitely be permitted to wear their home clothes to school.you may ask why?why should we wear home clothes to school?Think about it.
Wearing home clothes would let us be more comfortable in our school environment and to concentrate better.It also allows us to create a sense of individual identity for ousrselves,boosting our confidence in life.
With common reports on students commiting suicide because of excessive stress, One main contributing factor is the large number of exams students have to prepare and face on a daily basis.Thus,exams in school should be reduced or held less frequently,allowing students like us to enjoy school life without feeling burdened. Would we want our fellow schoolmates to commit suicide because of an unsolved problem or because of a bad result? NO! There are no unsolved problems in the world. Always look on the bright side - After all, childhood is the best time of a person's life, isnt it?
By:Vismitha and Wei Ling
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-Having more emotive words in your speech would have made it sound more intersesting
ReplyDelete-Ending sentence was nice.
-Sentence structure was good.
It's more like an argumentative essay instead of a speech because more emotive weods or suitable repititon should input.
ReplyDeleteGrammar is good.
I think the second paragraph is nice, but why don't you try some one sentence's paragraph to make your point stronger.
ReplyDeleteI agreee that it is more like an argumentative essay. More etional words will be better. You express your ideas clearly and fully.
ReplyDeleteI like the points.
the points are interesting. the last sentence is a good conclusion as it makes one think more about their school life.
ReplyDeletegood job. You may want to add more of your personal experiences into the speech to show that you can relate to the topic:)
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